Tuesday, 2 August 2022
How Green Was My Valley by Richard Llewellyn July 21, 2022
Sunday, 10 July 2022
Poetry Session – June 30, 2022
– Should one prioritise the content or the spirit of the poem?
– Should the translation remain faithful to the text, or is a freer version required?
– How should the quirks of an author’s unconventional syntax be rendered into the target language?
– What to do with cultural and linguistic details like rituals, gestures, dialectal colloquialisms and idioms?
– Should footnotes be used to explain allusions to history, mythology, and prior literature?
– If the original poem has a formal structure such as meter and rhyme, is it necessary to retain that and if so, at what cost?
– Should divisions such as line breaks and stanzas be followed?
The ideal is that translations should not read as translations, but as “poems, a new voice perfect in their own right, transcending the barriers …” (Wendy Doniger)
While Nabaneeta Dev Sen had the close collaboration of her daughter to create the translations, in Victor Hugo’s case (poem A Sunset chosen by Zakia from the collection Feuilles d'Automne or Leaves of Autumn), the translator was the original poet and mystic, Francis Thompson, well-known for his poem The Hound of Heaven:
I fled Him, down the arches of the years;
I fled Him, down the labyrinthine ways
Of my own mind; and in the mist of tears
We had two Welsh poets represented, Alun Lewis the war poet who wrote two small poetry collections and two short books of prose which have stood the test of time. He was dead at 28 in a brutal war he despised but which he joined, ignoring a long history of mental depression and a strong pacifist bent. He said: “I’m not going to kill. Be killed perhaps, instead.”
Geetha’s choice was an eloquent rendering of Fern Hill by Dylan Thomas, the more famous hard-drinking poet of Wales who was considered too Welsh to be English in England, and had the simultaneous misfortune of being too English for the Welsh. Everybody remembers him for his villanelle Do not go gentle into that good night
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
To reciprocate Joe’s choice of a Bangla poet, KumKum chose a Malayali poet, though one who wrote all his poems in English, having been brought up outside Kerala. Apart from writing poems, the best experience in his life was getting married to a wonderful doctor, Kavery Nambisan, from Kodagu (Coorg) who is a literary person, in addition to spending a life of service as a doctor in remote areas.
Kavery Nambisan who works in rural hospitals has written seven books novels and children's books
Thomo was true to form in choosing a lyricist and song-writer, the front man of the Led Zeppelin rock band. He sang for us one of the famous numbers, Stairway to Heaven, which delighted everyone. But having to go off on a rescue mission to a wedding, he could not be present. Readers must be thankful he sent a recording which is permanently theirs to listen to from a link below within this blog post.
Arundhaty chose a poet, Suniti Namjoshi, who is in the forefront of the feminist movement, but began her professional life as an officer in the Indian Administrative Service before pursuing higher studies abroad. She wrote poems and stories and became a noted academic in Canada, USA and UK. The poem chosen was somewhat dark:
like any other creature, talks perhaps
more than is normal, her doom no brighter,
nor her death less dismal than any other.
We had Devika reciting an elegy for Africa (a continent of countries she loves) by one of its famous sons from Sierra Leone who overcame racism and prejudice to contribute at the highest level of academia, medical science and poetry – Davidson Nicol. Africa, he describes, as a continent for loving:
and the bougainvillea in mauve passion
entwines itself around strong branches
the palm trees stand like tall proud moral women
shaking their plaited locks against the
cool suggestive evening breeze;
Shoba recited an astrophysical poem by Marie Howe, inspired by black holes and the singularity (infinity) Einstein found as one possible solution to his famous equations of Gravitation in 1916. Black holes were made popular by Stephen Hawking (to whom the poem is dedicated), although it was the physicist John Wheeler who first used the term in 1967. The poem is titled Singularity and written in the form of an interior monologue, reflecting on the origin of the universe and humans.
Singularity by Marie Howe
Monday, 6 June 2022
The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas - 26 May, 2022
Le Comte de Monte-Cristo (The Count of Monte Cristo) was published in serial fashion in the Journal des Débats starting in 1844 and was published in book form in 1846. Dumas cunningly devised the ending of each chapter so the readers would wait captivated, in expectation of what would happen next week in the adventures.
The Count of Monte Cristo – First English edition, 1846
The Count of Monte Cristo was translated into all modern languages and has never been out of print. More than thirty films have appeared based on it. Two may be mentioned, the first starring Richard Chamberlain in 1975 is fairly faithful to the book (1h 41m):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&v=TUCk9jK-xsU
Richard Chamberlain as The Count of Monte Cristo and Kate Nelligan as Mercédès in the 1975 film.
The second is much longer version which appeared on TV in France as a series, featuring the formidable French actor, Gérard Depardieu starring in a 6-hour version of the unabridged novel in French with English subtitles :
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=rnAWw7MAN3U
Gérard Depardieu as Edmond Dantès and Ornella Muti as Mercédès in the French TV mini-series.
The particular abridged translation chosen was a great success, both for its prose style, and it’s hewing to the essential storyline without distractions.
The Count of Monte Cristo (abridged), cover of the Château d'If, the prison where Edmond Dantès was held captive – with an Introduction by Luc Sante.
The prison is situated on the Île d’If, which is a tiny island, only three kilometres from mainland France, west of the old port of Marseille. The entire island is heavily fortified; high ramparts with gun platforms surmount the cliffs, which rise steeply from the surrounding ocean. It was built in 1524-31 on the orders of King Francis 1, apparently to defend the coastline from sea-based attacks. The isolated location and dangerous offshore currents of the château made it an ideal escape proof prison much like the island of Alcatraz in modern USA. Its use as a dumping ground for political and religious detainees soon made it one of the most feared and notorious jails in France. Over 3500 Huguenots, i.e. Protestant Christians were sent to Château d’If. This novel has made it internationally famous since 1844. Dantès makes a daring escape from the castle. In reality, no inmate is known to have made it out of the prison. The modern Château d’If maintains a roughly hewn dungeon in honour of Dantes, as a tourist attraction.As was common practice in those days prisoners were treated differently according to their class and wealth. The poorest were placed at the bottom, up to twenty or more per cell. The wealthiest were able to pay for their own private cells higher up, with windows and a fireplace.
It is evident why this novel remains a best-seller in its many translations after almost 200 years: it provides adventure, a gripping storyline, and a great variety of characters and scenes from different regions of Europe with the local flavour imparted well. Something dramatic is always happening. It has all the ingredients for success: a mysterious hero with superhuman powers; and portrayals of jealousy, cupidity, love, and revenge.
The reader will find many passages that are worthy of attentive reading, all inspired by the grand style of Alexandre Dumas; some filled with pathos, some menacing, others full of swashbuckling braggadocio, still others soft and romancing. Some of the relationships border on adoration, impossible to find in contemporary humans with their egalitarian outlook.
The friends we have lost do not repose under the ground; they are buried deep in our hearts.
The original French is more poetic:
... les amis que nous avons perdus ne reposent pas dans la terre, ils sont ensevelis dans notre cœur ...
Which deserves an appropriate couplet in English:
They do not lie in grassy parks.
Monday, 9 May 2022
Life and Works of Shakespeare Celebrated - April 29, 2022
The dedication by Thomas Thorpe's of Shakespeare's Sonnets
This guest of summer,
The temple-haunting martlet, does approve,
By his loved mansionry, that the heaven’s breath
Smells wooingly here. No jutty, frieze,
Buttress, nor coign of vantage, but this bird
Hath made his pendant bed and procreant cradle.
Where they most breed and haunt, I have observed,
The air is delicate.
But the scene staged by Priya and Arundhaty has Macbeth gaping in horror at the bloody ghost of the murdered Banquo during a feast at his manor. You can see enacted at
Devika took up an old favourite, The Taming of the Shrew. Recapping the final speech when Katharina the shrew has turned into Katharina the obedient wife, Devika observed that for once Shakespeare goes against the grain of his known penchant for strong independent women. In the scene Devika chose, Katharina is instructing the other ladies on the duties of a wife in Act 5, Scene 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dnd2lpe-rW4
Zefirelli’s 1967 film version has yet to be surpassed. It has Richard Burton as Petruchio, Elizabeth Taylor as Katharina, Michael Hordern as Baptista, and Michael York as Lucentio.
“The world’s most celebrated movie couple in the motion picture they are made for!” was how this film was advertised. This version shows the play as funny and entertaining, the way WS probably intended. The gorgeous colour in the sets and costumes is characteristic of Zefirelli, and is seen again in his production of Romeo and Juliet. The Shakespearean verse sounds quite believable as daily conversation in the actors’ mouths. This film is a great introduction to Shakespeare for anyone who hasn't seen his plays before. It is the perfect antidote for those who have been intimidated into thinking that Shakespeare is only for experts and scholars.
The Plays are central to the legend of Shakespeare’s universality. The Sonnets, however, can vie with the Plays in their smaller compass, for they are so compressed in thought and filled with vigorous speech that they merit reading several times – not just by lovers, but all who want to learn the variety of torments a human goes through in life, quite apart from the anguish of love. The Plays are wonderful. But once you get into the Sonnets it takes on the ageless quality that Shakespeare himself attested to in Sonnet 18 when he said.
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
The sentiments expressed are entirely contemporary and the language too. With a little familiarity that comes from frequent reading, the language also becomes contemporary — gender, sexuality, love, self-loathing, anguish, hate and everything else find their truest chronicler in WS.
Sonnets 1 to 126 seem to be addressed to a young man, and the first 17 encourage the youth to marry and father children. Then the subjects diversify. Some are erotic, while others reflect upon the anguish caused by love.
Sonnets 127 to 152 are addressed to a woman, the so-called ‘Dark Lady’ of Shakespearean legend. This woman is elusive, often tyrannous, and causes the speaker great pain and shame. The two final sonnets (Sonnets 153 and 154) focus on the classical god Cupid, and playfully detail desire and longing.
The Sonnets were probably written, and perhaps revised, between the early 1590s and about 1605. Sonnets 128 and 144 were printed in the poetry collection called The Passionate Pilgrim in 1599. They were first printed as a sequence in 1609, with a mysterious dedication to ‘Mr. W.H.’
Shakespearean sonnets are composed of 14 lines of iambic pentameters:
da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM
As any she belied with false compare.
For further reference see: https://www.bl.uk/works/shakespeares-sonnets
Also see: https://www.bl.uk/shakespeare/articles/an-introduction-to-shakespeares-sonnets
The Art of Shakespeare′s Sonnets
https://www.amazon.in/Art-Shakespeare%E2%80%B2s-Sonnets-Paper-Belknap/dp/0674637127/
Another commentary is by Don Paterson:
Reading Shakespeare's Sonnets: A New Commentary
https://www.amazon.in/Reading-Shakespeares-Sonnets-New-Commentary/dp/0571245056/
Here below is the link to the transcript of a short lecture on what the Sonnets tell us about Shakespeare himself. It is by the distinguished Sir Stanley Wells, general editor of the Oxford Complete Works of Shakespeare, honorary president of the Shakespeare Birthplace Trust, and former director of The Shakespeare Institute:
The Sonnets have been set to music by many singers and composers. Paul Kelly has set seven of them to contemporary pop song rhythms. According to him the sonnets work naturally as lyrics. The fact that they are composed of metrical lines (each with 10 syllables), and rhymed, has many parallels with modern songs. Here he is singing Sonnet 18:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aj0kGzuL-cA
Sonnet 18 as a pop song by Paul Kelly from his album ‘Seven Sonnets & A Song’.
Our two readers, Thomo and Geetha, presented Sonnets 73 and 87 in song, and readers of this blog can listen to their recorded voices below.
Saturday, 9 April 2022
Alice Walker - The color Purple, March 24,2022
Sunday, 13 March 2022
Poetry Session – Feb 25, 2022
Make music sweet;
Strings by the river where
The willows meet.
There's music along the river
For Love wanders there,
Pale flowers on his mantle,
Dark leaves on his hair.
All softly playing,
With head to the music bent,
And fingers straying
Upon an instrument.
(From Chamber Music, 1907)
Since February is Black History month in America, KumKum chose to read a young contemporary poet, Amanda Gorman, who has been named the first Youth Poet Laureate of America. Another black poet, Alice Walker also figured, whose parting advice is:
… expect nothing. Live frugally
On surprise.
She stands in contrast to those who wrote poetry in their youth in the sixties, the beat poets like Jack Kerouac, Allen Ginsberg, and Lawrence Ferlinghetti. Thomo chose Ginsberg and read from his poem Howl.
… the melting snow, instilling
Dry sadness into eyes that weep.
The variety among the poems is attested by there being a woman Dogri poet, Padma Sachdev, in English translation represented, as well as Milton from the opposite end of the spectrum, describing the Biblical strongman Samson, given the epithet Agonistes, i.e. one engaged in struggle.
Saturday, 12 February 2022
Kiran Desai – Hullabaloo in the Guava Orchard Jan 28, 2022
The Sermon in the Guava Tree by Kiran Desai appeared as a short story on page 90 in the June 23, 1997 issue of The New Yorker. The novel appeared a year later.
A holy man is consulted, and he says all Sampath needs is a mate, for whom there is a standard roster of requisite qualifications. This was the subject of the passage Saras read from the novel. A talcum-powdered girl is found and she is hoisted up the tree to Sampath.
Sampath notices people he knew in the audience below, whose letters he had secretly read in the post office after steaming them open. He proceeds to divulge snippets and after a few such episodes of seeming clairvoyance, he is confirmed as a Baba, a god-man.
Mr. Chawla, has the racketeer’s epiphany: Sampath might make his family's fortune. They could be rich! “How many men of unfathomable wisdom possessed unfathomable bank accounts?” At this point begins the pampering of Sampath who is provided every comfort for his chosen arboreal existence:
“He made a lovely picture seated there amid the greenery, reclining on his cot at a slight angle to the world; propped against numerous cushions, tucked up, during chilly evenings, in a glamorous satin quilt covered with leopard-skin spots. On his head he sported a tea-cozy-like red woollen hat that had been knitted by his grandmother.”
Thus ensconced in his orchard bower, Sampath gave what came to be known as The Sermon in the Guava Tree. Sampath uses his secret knowledge from steamed (and steamy) letters to amaze the audience. Then he issues a series of wisdom sayings, which Kiran Desai attributes in the novel’s acknowledgement, to Bhargava’s Standard Illustrated Dictionary of the Hindi Language, compiled by R. C. Pathak, BA, LT.
– Many a pickle makes a mickle . . .
– When the buffaloes fight, the crops suffer.
– It is a hard winter when dogs eat dogs.
– Every cock fights best on his own dunghill.
Etc.
The short story ends with Sampath making the news:
POST-OFFICE CLERK CLIMBS TREE
“Fleeing tedious duties at the Shahkot Post Office, a clerk has been reported to have settled in a large guava tree. According to popular speculation, he is one of an unusual spiritual nature, his child-like ways being coupled with unfathomable wisdom.”
But the novel has a more mysterious ending in which a metamorphosis of Sampath takes place into a Buddha-like Guava with his own birthmark. The langurs then spirit him off, thus transformed, to a distant forest in the mountains.
Sunday, 9 January 2022
Humorous Poems – Dec 3, 2021
The Covid19 virus continues to keep people apart but the readers were determined to use digital methods to meet over the Internet the entire year using the Zoom app. While we might have enjoyed each other's company more if we were physically close, the distance has not been an insuperable obstacle, as this session of humorous poems showed.
We dressed in fancy ways to illustrate the whimsical poems we were reading. We extracted all the humour that rhyme and nonsense encourage. How is it one may ask that a serious poet not given to rhyme, one whose fame arrived with The Waste Land expressing the sombre fears and brokenness of four years of the first world war, could write with freedom and comic verve on the threshold of yet another war? But that's exactly what T.S. Eliot did in one of the poems recited (The Naming of Cats)
It isn’t just one of your holiday games;
You may think at first I’m as mad as a hatter
When I tell you, a cat must have THREE DIFFERENT NAMES.
Lear's original 1846 Book of Nonsense was composed of limericks. Later other poems like the famous Owl and the Pussy Cat were added.
There is no doubt that humour and nonsense bring out the best in poetry. How memorable these poems are; fortunate those who are introduced to them as children for they leave in their wake the unending joy of remembering and reciting them !
Tuesday, 23 November 2021
Elena Ferrante – My Brilliant Friend, Nov 19, 2021
My Brilliant Friend – first edition of the English translation, 2012, by Europa Editions
“Elena Ferrante may be the best contemporary novelist you have never heard of,” said The Economist in a review one year after Europa Editions brought out the English translation of L‘amica geniale as My Brilliant Friend. In the years following 2012 three other novels were published that follow the two friends as they grow up – The Story of a New Name (2013), Those Who Leave and Those Who Stay (2014), and The Story of the Lost Child (2015). The four novels constitute the Neapolitan Novels quartet by Elena Ferrante. The first two books in the series have been adapted into an HBO television series entitled My Brilliant Friend.
The HBO Series starring Gaia Girace as Lila and Margarita Mazzuco as Lenù
Elena Ferrante, the author, has maintained a studied anonymity, although she is willing to answer questions by e-mail, via her publisher. Her translator into English, Ann Goldstein, an editor at The New Yorker, did not have access to her directly; the film directors who transferred her novels to the screen had only the most fleeting help from her. Her attitude is summed up in a comment she made: “I believe that books, once they are written, have no need of their authors.”
A collection of essays, letters and interviews by Elena Ferrante
For Ferrante’s heroines, life is a conundrum of attachment and detachment. Illustration by Annette Marnat in The New Yorker
Friday, 12 November 2021
Poetry Session – Oct 29, 2021
Shelley claimed poets were “the unacknowledged legislators of the world.” Their moral influence on politics is exemplified by the spoken words which struck the world’s conscience when a young Sudanese-American poet was invited to tell the gathered attendees of COP26 in Glasgow what was happening as a result of climate change to the voiceless people of the world.
We are treated at every poetry session to a similar experience as our readers declaim their selections. The written and the spoken words inspire us and we return energised to our lives, grateful for a hour or two of the human spirit bursting forth in word and song (yes, we listened to Leonard Cohen, that twin of Bob Dylan).
Two of our readers are leaving the group for personal reasons. We shall keep in touch directly; and indirectly through this blog. On occasion we have had past members join us for particular sessions.
The next meeting will be to read Elena Ferrante’s novel, My Brilliant Friend, on Nov 19 via Zoom. For those who have purchased the 4-novel Kindle edition, MBF, the first novel, ends at Chapter 62 with the sentence: “It was the pair she had made with Rino, making and unmaking them for months, ruining her hands.”













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